the saddest lines

Wow! We have this homework to write our saddest lines like what Pablo Neruda did and here's mine:

Why can't you see me in this empty room?
sitting alone, solely
hearing raindrops falling, leaves rustling
tears from my eyes keep falling down
rolling down my cheeks
even when I close my eyes you are there
now I know I am your casualty

Sounds familiar? Yeah, I got the other lines from my other poems. Oh well. hihi Hmmm...some of my classmates like MIKEE and CHAI said their lines were tagos! Meaning, they are in love! haha Actually, I know Chai was in love but now...I'm not really sure. But Mikee..hmmmm, I smell something fishy! haha IN LOVE SI MIKEE!!! :)